Some people think that a sense of competition in children should be encouraged. Others believe that children who are taught to co-operate rather than compete become more useful adults. Discuss both these views and give your own opinion.

There are two opinions about competition in childhood. According to the

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point of view, children should be inspired with an idea to compete, whereas others argue about it and believe that cooperation is more significant for the human’s future. To my point of

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all negative and positive sides related to

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discussion, both opinions are considered true. In

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essay both aspects will be shown.

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, taking into account, that the world is highly competitive in the 21st century, competitions are so important for the life of a child. Competition spirit forces children

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responsibility, due to that they are motivated and ambitious.

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, they work on weaknesses and mistakes and improve their skills and knowledge.

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children become more confident and achieve a lot of results and successes.

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, based on some facts and situations life shows that cooperation is

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a useful skill in the life of a person. Beside of challenges children should have a sense of teamwork because they will work with other people in the future and must be able to maintain a

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relationship.

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, when they will work,

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projects will be, where several people must collaborate in order to achieve benefits. In teamwork there is no necessity to compete as everybody operates for the

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of the company. In conclusion, I would like to mention that it is major to keep a balance between these two approaches to nurturing. The sense of competition is as vital as cooperation and people should use them.