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Do you agree or disagree with the following statement? Sometimes it is better not to tell the truth. Use specific reasons and details to support your answer.

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Honesty, is one of the virtues
that is
 taught to children, since childhood. It has been quoted in all the holy books that honesty is the best policy.
However
, in the viewpoint, of some people, it is better to lie sometimes. It is disagreed that, lying sometimes is better. Analysing the difficult situations, dishonesty can lead to as well as amount of false statements an individual might have to make up to cover a single lie will prove
this
.
Firstly
, untruthfulness can put a person in tricky situations. Truth makes the circumstances clear and direct, while the opposite
,
Accept space
,
makes it worse. There have been numerous examples through history, where, a false statement has lead different people to destructive states. An illustration of
this
, is the war between Mughal and Marathas in the 2000's, which was merely caused by the dishonest news spread by the commander of Mughals, for his own benefit.
Secondly
, 100 lies are needed to cover a
.
Accept space
.
 Frequently, it is seen that, a person has to make a number of wrong statements to, support the
first
 lie.
This
 creates stress as well as
complicates
Suggestion
complicated
complicating
 life.
For example
, when an employee lies to his boss, about the amount of work completed, he
consequently
 has to explain the details and will probably have to lie about that too. To conclude, honesty can make a human being's life easy, while dishonesty can make it complex.
Hence
, In my opinion, it is advisable to be truthful, in every situation. Not only, does
this
 help avoid difficult stages, but
also
, is a secret to stress free living.
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