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Parents of obese children should be punished for making their children fat. Do you agree or disagree?

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Children who punished in their childhood, Mature
then
 other's. Parents punishable if their children adding fat. In my opinion, the way children grew up day by day children go through change in their physiology so parents must avoid punishing their children for that.
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Suggestion
For
 instance, my neighbours have a child who's thin in his 5 to 6 years his wait accounted 50 kg, but meanwhile he grew up weight factually decrease till at the age of 20 he has 50 kg weight still. So I think parents must have to help children with their exercises. Schooling level numerous students have heavy fat and in that situation individuals should help children to take care of body and teach them some rules that can help children. In conclusion, parents must have to avoid punishing their children
furthermore
 trying to build their weight more stronger but not fatty.
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Topic Vocabulary:
  • obesity
  • genetics
  • socio-economic status
  • nutritional education
  • physical activity programs
  • adverse effects
  • mental health issues
  • responsibility sharing
  • implementation
  • privileged families
  • supportive environment
  • lifestyle changes
  • educational campaigns
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