It is becoming more and more difficult to escape the influence of the media on our lives. Discuss the advantages and disadvantages of living in a media rich society. Give reasons for your answer and include any relevant examples from your own knowledge or experience.

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The 21st century
have
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has
has had
modern technology. Media
is play
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plays
imperative role
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an imperative role
in society,
its
the thing named or in question
it
has both
prons
in favor of (an action or proposal etc.)
pros
brains
prone
and cause. Due to
use
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of media escape the problem of influence.
First
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of all, mass media had several benefits and many forms
such
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as, the internet, digital
news paper
a daily or weekly publication on folded sheets; contains news and articles and advertisements
newspaper
and television.
This
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is provide
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provides
is providing
has provided
is to provide
us entertainment, news, scientific,
acedmic
associated with academia or an academy
academic
information. In the modern era the
use
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of
internet
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the internet
is increased, because of the media form internet, we know the detail of
relative
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a relative
who lives in
other
any of various alternatives; some other
another
country, students
use
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it for study purpose just as assignment writing, for doing online courses. While Media provides us to
day
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to
day
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news and we have knowledge about the
whats
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what's
going in the world. Whenever, It is helpful to know anything in a
second
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.
On the other hand
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,
media
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the media
also
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have some ill-effects. In the India, sociology and
philosology
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school proved that higher
use
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of media effect on our brain and people influenced by it. If it dissemination wrong information in society people feel terror or
pressimisstic
expecting the worst possible outcome
pessimistic
,
for instance
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, a couple
month
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months
ago in Indian one news spread
on
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of
television some toxin available in
grape fruits
citrus tree bearing large round edible fruit having a thick yellow rind and juicy somewhat acid pulp
grapefruits
therefore
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the approach effects on
farmer
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farmers
the farmer
. In
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concluding
, media play
biggest part
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the biggest part
in
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of
the world, and it's required in
day
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to
day
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living.
when
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When
we attract on the negative aspect its dangerous for society.
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Include an introduction and conclusion

A conclusion is essential for IELTS writing task 2. It is more important than most people realise. You will be penalised for missing a conclusion in your IELTS essay.

The easiest paragraph to write in an essay is the conclusion paragraph. This is because the paragraph mostly contains information that has already been presented in the essay – it is just the repetition of some information written in the introduction paragraph and supporting paragraphs.

The conclusion paragraph only has 3 sentences:

  • Summary
  • Restatement of thesis
  • Prediction or recommendation

Example:

To summarize, a robotic teacher does not have the necessary disciple to properly give instructions to students and actually works to retard the ability of a student to comprehend new lessons. Therefore, it is clear that the idea of running a classroom completely by a machine cannot be supported. After thorough analysis on this subject, it is predicted that the adverse effects of the debate over technology-driven teaching will always be greater than the positive effects, and because of this, classroom teachers will never be substituted for technology.

Start your conclusion with a linking phrase. Here are some examples:

  • In conclusion
  • To conclude
  • To summarize
  • Finally
  • In a nutshell
  • In general

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