Introduction
A lot amount of population on Earth agrees with that to send people who dangerous for
society but
some crimes require more vast review to accurately define the conditions or ignorance that led to the commission of crimes, so in Accept comma addition
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The major treatment to repent and hold accountable a person who make a
crime
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can help to reduce atrocity between people and may be the result of what awaits a person who effectuate awful cases attitude towards human life. Linking Words
Moreover
, imprisonment can impact on a criminal`s conscience and after that he regrets about crimes. So we can see a good influence to their Linking Words
behavior
and more importantly, they can change manner of acting or controlling yourself
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on life, which may provide Suggestion
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life in society, Suggestion
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However some
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more investigated in
detail because of their Suggestion
investigated in more
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Education system
is vital thing not only Suggestion
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awareness some rules in society can lead Linking Words
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the worst consequence, which means that people to some extent, they do not understand what is happening due to lack of information, Suggestion
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an omission on the part of education. So we need to keep an open mind. Broadening the mind is the major Linking Words
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Conclusion
To sum up, imprisonment is a good reason to show
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people the consequences that have been identified as threats to a living organism or other crimes. And education system needs to be more developed by the government to remove Accept comma addition
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crime
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