Nowadays technology is increasingly being used to monitor what people are saying and doing (for example, through cell phone tracking and security cameras). In many cases, the people being monitored are unaware that this is happening. Do you think the advantages of this development outweigh the disadvantages?

Technology

keeps changing every day, in p

art of

Accept comma addition

part, of

monitoring action or recording information it is useful for people in various areas.

However

, when they get used to it and are unaware of

this

kind of

technology

, it may

cause

a minor inconvenience. In my opinion,

although

using

this

technology

can

cause

a problem, the benefit is worth the risk because it provides a higher security performance and tracking efficiency.

This

essay will demonstrate the superiority of monitoring

technology

by using an example from shipping service and

Facebook

. When thinking about recording data, some people think about movies or videos in the entertainment part, but for the safety part a security camera will be the

first

thought. It used for crime prevention and a tool that police use for investigation. In the past some cases could not find any evidence to arrest the criminal, but with

this

device a crime rate decreases significantly.

Also

with a tracking system, the

technology

supports people by finding a location of loss items

such

as a mobile phone.

In addition

, the tracking system helps a shipping industry, which is useful for customers who want to check the product’s status. In the past, customers could not indicate their goods. Sometimes the products misplace, lost, or found in a defective condition, but now they can use tracking applications to assure their merchandise.

This

example serves as evidence that the monitoring

technology

is beneficial for people.

On the other hand

, without paying attention to detail can

cause

a problem. When the recording seems to be regularly in the society, people might be not conscious about it.

Therefore

, their decision in doing different things may be less focused.

Facebook

is a social media application that requires personal information and interesting data,

such

as hobbies, favourite food, or cloth style. With the advertising system on the

Facebook

platform,

Facebook

will show y

our

second person pronoun; the person addressed

you

interesting

such

as a newly released book from your favourite writer and

then

you will buy it immediately without careless.

Consequently

,

this

may affect your financial status. The case of

Facebook

shows that

as a result

of using

technology

, making a decision could be less concentrated, but

this

can be solved by being more aware of everyday life. To conclude,

although

the

technology

of monitoring and tracking can

cause

an inconvenience I still think that the advantages of

this

development outweigh the disadvantages because it is useful for users including protecting yourself from criminals, finding loss items, or tracking your order.