You stayed with a local family when you participated in an exchange program in lreland. You returned to your home country in a hurry and found that you had forgotten to take your laptop. Writea letter to the family and thank them for their hospitality. Describe your computer and where it is,and ask the host to send it back to you.
Dear Mr, Jackson,
I hope you are doing well.
l
am writing this
letter to request that you can
help me send back my laptop.
First of all, Verb problem
apply
l
am extremely grateful for your hospitality in Ireland. l
have to say that was the happiest day of my life, and created memories that l
will cherish forever, At that moment, your guys take
me to see many beautiful landscapes and new friends, which Wrong verb form
took
helps
me Wrong verb form
helped
adopt
to locallife faster.
Meanwhile, unfortunately, my computer Correct your spelling
adapt
lost
in your home, but Add a missing verb
was lost
l
only discovered this
situation when l
arrived in my country. l
remember that l
should put it on my bedside table. At the same time, my laptop has a lot of important study materials. Therefore
, l
would very appreciate
Correct quantifier usage
much appreciate
if
you could send it and its host back to my home. Correct pronoun usage
it if
Furthermore
, please be careful of transportation damage, as it is a large object, and also
l
will fully bear the transport costs.I am looking forward to hearing from you, and if you need further
information, please do not hesitate to contact me, as l
am pleased to supply it, At the same time, l
hope we have the opportunity to meet again.
Best wishes,
XiyueSubmitted by cyh000823 on
Unauthorized use and/or duplication of this material without express and written permission from this site’s author and/or owner is strictly prohibited. Excerpts and links may be used, provided that full and clear credit is given to Writing9 with appropriate and specific direction to the original content.
task achievement
Consider adding more details about the laptop, such as brand and color, to make identification easier.
coherence cohesion
Ensure the letter is thoroughly checked for grammatical and phrasing errors to improve clarity and professionalism.
task achievement
The letter contains a polite and grateful tone, which is suitable for the context.
coherence cohesion
The letter is well-structured with a clear introduction, body, and conclusion.