You stayed with a local family when you participated in an exchange program in lreland. You returned to your home country in a hurry and found that you had forgotten to take your laptop. Writea letter to the family and thank them for their hospitality. Describe your computer and where it is,and ask the host to send it back to you.

Dear Mr, Jackson, I hope you are doing well.
l
am writing
this
letter to request that you
can
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help me send back my laptop. First of all,
l
am extremely grateful for your hospitality in Ireland.
l
have to say that was the happiest day of my life, and created memories that
l
will cherish forever, At that moment, your guys
take
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me to see many beautiful landscapes and new friends, which
helps
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me
adopt
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to locallife faster. Meanwhile, unfortunately, my computer
lost
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in your home, but
l
only discovered
this
situation when
l
arrived in my country.
l
remember that
l
should put it on my bedside table. At the same time, my laptop has a lot of important study materials.
Therefore
,
l
would very
appreciate
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if
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you could send it and its host back to my home.
Furthermore
, please be careful of transportation damage, as it is a large object, and
also
l
will fully bear the transport costs.I am looking forward to hearing from you, and if you need
further
information, please do not hesitate to contact me, as
l
am pleased to supply it, At the same time,
l
hope we have the opportunity to meet again. Best wishes, Xiyue
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Consider adding more details about the laptop, such as brand and color, to make identification easier.
coherence cohesion
Ensure the letter is thoroughly checked for grammatical and phrasing errors to improve clarity and professionalism.
task achievement
The letter contains a polite and grateful tone, which is suitable for the context.
coherence cohesion
The letter is well-structured with a clear introduction, body, and conclusion.

You are not ready for IELTS Speaking, if you

  • Can’t speak smoothly without pauses.
  • Use simple words and lack vocabulary.
  • Feel nervous and anxious when speaking.
Topic Vocabulary:
  • hospitality
  • exchange program
  • memorable experiences
  • grateful
  • brand
  • model
  • distinguishing features
  • exact location
  • practical value
  • shipping costs
  • send back
  • cover expenses
  • appreciate
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