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homework: Having more money and less free time is better than earning less money and having more free time. Discuss both views and state your opinion.

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In the modern day, the majority of people try to earn more and more
money
. Some people consider that earning more
money
 and having less free
time
 is normal, but others think that earning less
money
 and having more free
time
 is better. In
this
 essay I will discuss both views and give my own opinion. On the one hand, having more cash is important for big families.
For example
, there are four children in the family, all of them need clothes, food and shoes, so that their parents ought to
work
 more.
Secondly
, the majority of teenagers need capital for their future education, so that people star
work
 harder to earn
money
 for their children.
On the other hand
, people need free
time
 for their hobbies.
For example
, workers can go to the meetings with their friends after job.
Also
, all workers need
time
 to relax.
For instance
, people should not
work
 all the
time
, as they will stop caring about
work
. In my opinion, it depends on people. If someone like their job, they do not need free
time
. If people feel tired, they need
time
 to relax. In conclusion, there are a lot of reasons why people should
work
 more and more;
however
, there are
also
 a lot of drawbacks.
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