To continue rise in the worlds population is the greatest problem faced by humanity at the presentataion. What are the courses of this continue rise? Do you agree that it is the greatest problem faced by humanity?

Earth is the planet with enormous diversity and all the living creatures living on it.Nowadays

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worlds

population

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is continuosly rise

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is continuously rising

is continuously rise

has continuously risen

continuously rises

with time.Presently

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we see that human faces

plathora

extreme excess

plethora

of complications due to uncontrolled

population

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and it is not only our country

problem but

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problem, but

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is complicated issue

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is a complicated issue

for all the high populated countries. To come out from

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miserable condition

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we need to understand the major cause of

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high rise of

population

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Firstly

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illiteracy is

major cause

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a major cause

the major cause

of high

population

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if we saw the developed countries where literacy level is very high

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they understand the worst effects of

big family

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a big family

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so

to a very great extent or degree

So

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lack of knowledge is the significant reason

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for

uncontrolled birth rate

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uncontrolled birth rates

the uncontrolled birth rate

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poverty

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also play

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also plays

vital role

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a vital role

to increase the

population

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.Poor people cannot afford adequate education

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Due to unawareness

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they

elevated

(of pain or sorrow) made easier to bear

alleviated

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problem for humans.

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Thirdly, and

lastly

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some culture and government

also

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responsible for

such

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situation.

For instance

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in

some

one or some or every or all without specification

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particular culture some conservative leaders gave wrong

campained

a race between candidates for elective office

campaigned

against the use of birth

controll

power to direct or determine

control

precautions. I strongly believe that from

lot

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a lot

of issues

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rise of

population

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is relatively major problem faced by present humanity.

Asthetics

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Aesthetics

of earth is their environment and nature and it all

deminished

impaired by diminution

diminished

if our

population

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should not

been

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be

controll

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controlled

control

controls

and over

population

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is never be a fruitful our future.