More and more prisons are being built to house the world’s criminals, and many people believe long-term imprisonment is the answer to solving the crime problem. However, others feel that psychological assistance is what is required. Discuss both views and give your own opinion.

Nowadays, there has been an increase

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prisons constructions

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around the world.

Although

many people agree that imprisonment will help in the transgression solution, others do not concur and insist on psychological aid for

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arrested. I do believe that both

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society needs

prisons

, but

this

is not the solution to crime, it is needed to have psychological improvement and community training.

Firstly

, the construction of

prisons

is necessary to support the transgression rise, the criminals need to be penalized for their errors.

However

, in a long time, it might not be sufficient for the change of mind in these people, so, others attitudes may be installed.

For example

, a man who raped someone will not change his perspective after years incarcerated.

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this

man is helping with

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professional, he might change his mind and

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not commit a violation again.

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,

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mind assistance is necessary for everyone who is arrested,

due to

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during the incarceration and to rethink their behaviours.

For instance

, a woman who robbed a store, even if she is arrested for years, it might not be enough.

Nonetheless

, if she rethinks and studies her own comportments with a psychologist there will be a better chance of she does not commit a violation in the future.

Thirdly

, even though the construction of

prisons

and psychological management are necessary, the education of

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society is the most important solution.

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might be the key to

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criminal rates. As an illustration, when kids learn since

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childhood that

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misconduct

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not worth it, they will be prepared to say no to the possibility of executing a crime meanwhile the adulthood.

To sum up

, it is undoubtedly that the construction of

prisons

is important

due to

the increase

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infraction rates, but, other attitudes are

also

outstanding as physiological assistance and

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education against

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. In my opinion, the quick fix of it will be based on

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