While some people consider global warming to be the most pressing environmental problem which we have at the moment, others believe that deforestation has more devastating impact on our world. Discuss both views and give your opinion.

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Climate

changes

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change

is the most

appaling

able to attract interest or draw favorable attention

appealing

appalling

problem around the world that consist of many factors

one

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of them is

deforestation

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As a result

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, people divide into two camps where

one

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concern about global warming, another about forested lands.

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, I think both camps have valuable arguments and somehow right, and,

inusmach

(followed by as) in such a degree; in such a manner; seeing that; considering that; since

inasmuch

insomuch

as,

deforestation

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one

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of reason climate changing, so probably if stop logging, people will decelerate global warming or stop it.

First

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of all, few people can deny the fact that environmental changes are the most noticeable among all other troubles. Citizens all countries,

for example

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, have been feeling many changes in the local temperature and the season of

year

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the year

, which frequently ruin

local ecosystem

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the local ecosystem

a local ecosystem

local ecosystems

and harm the life of people.

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, many scientists and even ordinary journalists via the internet and the TV spread photographies and news about changes that

almoust

(of actions or states) slightly short of or not quite accomplished; all but

almost

inevitable

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inevitably

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, society cannot ignore the fact that global warming is the most stressful problem where people have been losing something

everyday

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every day

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, many scientists prove that

one

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of reason climate

changes

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change

deforestation

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that have other harmful effect too. Destroying ecosystem and decreasing the amount of clear air,

for instance

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, is

consequence

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consequent

consequential

on the surface of trouble with logging.

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enviromentalists

someone who works to protect the environment from destruction or pollution

environmentalists

are digging deeper

such

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problems and notice about more and more other troubles.

Consequently

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deforestation

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could be reason plenty of problems, and implicitly, owing to more attention on global warming, logging could

has

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have

more devastation effect

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a more devastating effect

more devastating effect

more devastating effects

on the Earth. To conclude, people around the world, presently, are struggling with many problems

where

have the quality of being; (copula, used with an adjective or a predicate noun)

were

all in

chain

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chains

the chain

a chain

and nobody can predict that more crucial.

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, from my perspective, people who bother about forested lands equally right with others who bother about global warming; since, stop logging could trigger chain that will be able to decelerate

enviromental

of or relating to the external conditions or surroundings

environmental

changes or even stop them.

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Topic Vocabulary:

Greenhouse effect
Industrial emissions
Sea levels
Extreme weather events
Biodiversity
Carbon emissions
Renewable energy
Paris Climate Accord
Carbon cycle
Soil erosion
Water cycles
Carbon sequestration
Reforestation
Sustainable forest management
Indigenous communities
Localized impacts

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