While some people consider global warming to be the most pressing environmental problem which we have at the moment, others believe that deforestation has more devastating impact on our world. Discuss both views and give your opinion.

Climate
changes
Suggestion
change
is the most
appaling
able to attract interest or draw favorable attention
appealing
appalling
problem around the world that consist of many factors
one
of them is
deforestation
.
As a result
, people divide into two camps where
one
concern about global warming, another about forested lands.
Hence
, I think both camps have valuable arguments and somehow right, and,
inusmach
(followed by as) in such a degree; in such a manner; seeing that; considering that; since
inasmuch
insomuch
as,
deforestation
is
one
of reason climate changing, so probably if stop logging, people will decelerate global warming or stop it.
First
of all, few people can deny the fact that environmental changes are the most noticeable among all other troubles. Citizens all countries,
for example
, have been feeling many changes in the local temperature and the season of
year
Suggestion
the year
, which frequently ruin
local ecosystem
Suggestion
the local ecosystem
a local ecosystem
local ecosystems
and harm the life of people.
Likewise
, many scientists and even ordinary journalists via the internet and the TV spread photographies and news about changes that
almoust
(of actions or states) slightly short of or not quite accomplished; all but
almost
inevitable
Suggestion
inevitably
.
Thus
, society cannot ignore the fact that global warming is the most stressful problem where people have been losing something
everyday
Suggestion
every day
.
Nevertheless
, many scientists prove that
one
of reason climate
changes
Suggestion
change
is
deforestation
that have other harmful effect too. Destroying ecosystem and decreasing the amount of clear air,
for instance
, is
consequence
Suggestion
consequent
consequential
on the surface of trouble with logging.
Moreover
,
enviromentalists
someone who works to protect the environment from destruction or pollution
environmentalists
are digging deeper
such
problems and notice about more and more other troubles.
Consequently
,
deforestation
could be reason plenty of problems, and implicitly, owing to more attention on global warming, logging could
has
Suggestion
have
more devastation effect
Suggestion
a more devastating effect
more devastating effect
more devastating effects
on the Earth. To conclude, people around the world, presently, are struggling with many problems
where
have the quality of being; (copula, used with an adjective or a predicate noun)
were
all in
chain
Suggestion
chains
the chain
a chain
and nobody can predict that more crucial.
Therefore
, from my perspective, people who bother about forested lands equally right with others who bother about global warming; since, stop logging could trigger chain that will be able to decelerate
enviromental
of or relating to the external conditions or surroundings
environmental
changes or even stop them.
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  • Greenhouse effect
  • Industrial emissions
  • Sea levels
  • Extreme weather events
  • Biodiversity
  • Carbon emissions
  • Renewable energy
  • Paris Climate Accord
  • Carbon cycle
  • Soil erosion
  • Water cycles
  • Carbon sequestration
  • Reforestation
  • Sustainable forest management
  • Indigenous communities
  • Localized impacts
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