More and more people are using computers or electronic devices to access the information, therefore there is no need for printed books, magazines, and newspapers on paper. To what extent do you agree or disagree?

It is true that paper-based printings are not necessary anymore in modern society. I believe that printed books can be abandoned in the near

future

Accept comma addition

future, although

although

these computers or internet-based reading materials have their advantages and disadvantages. On the one hand, using electronic devices

also

has some drawbacks, and it is more beneficial for us to read printed materials in the short term.

Firstly

, there are many blogs that contain unreliable information provided by amateur journalists.

In contrast

, before being published, traditional printed newspapers have to be strictly edited and checked in order to ensure their readers a high quality.

Secondly

, spending too much time sitting in front of a computer screen to read

news

Suggestion

the news

can cause various health problems

such

as back pain or eye strain.

On the other hand

, there are several reasons why using computers and electronics is attractive.

First

of all, with an internet-connected computer, people can read online news when and wherever they prefer.

Secondly

, online news is updated much faster than news in traditional printed newspapers, magazines, or books, which allows electronics users to access online news which is updated every hour.

Last

but not least, electronics users are able to save a large amount of money thanks to accessing numerous news websites.

For example

, my grandpa has to spend 1$ buying printed newspapers while my sister can earn money from reading online news by using a smartphone

instead

of paying any fees for them. In conclusion, it seems to me that traditional printed materials could be replaced by electronic information, and electronic information would play an essential role in our lives in the near future.