Many elderly people are no longer looked after by their families but are put in care homes or nursing homes. What are the advantages and disadvantages of this trend?

There is no doubt that taking
care
of
family’s elder member
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family elder members
family elder member
the family elder member
is an important responsibility. These days, a significant number of families are using the services of old
age
homes for looking after their elderly rather than taking
care
of their parents and grandparents themselves. In
this
essay, I will discuss the benefits and drawbacks of
this
trend.
To begin
with the positives, old
age
homes
are much better equipped
Suggestion
is much better equipped
to
care
for the elderly than our regular household. These institutions employ professional staff and have
ameneties
things that make you comfortable and at ease
amenities
which are difficult to replicate in a standard home.
For instance
, many of these nursing homes are pre-
equiped
provided or fitted out with what is necessary or useful or appropriate
equipped
with basic medical facilities like oxygen
support
, physiotherapy equipment etc., which can be very helpful for improving
quality
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the quality
of life at old
age
.
Besides
the
ameneties
things that make you comfortable and at ease
amenities
, the elderly
also
receive significant peer
support
at
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of
these institutions. These places have multiple members of old
age
and all these elder people often form deep friendships and
support
each other through thick and thin.
In contrast
, while at home, they often become lonely as most of their children and grandchildren remain outside throughout the day for work or education.
Nevertheless
, there are significant drawbacks of
this
trend that needs to be looked at. The
first
among them is the effect on mental health due to lack of family love and
support
.
This
is because a person is at his weakest during the end, and being with family through
this
time can be a strong pillar of
support
. While
at
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in
care
homes, elderly would not
be be
have the quality of being; (copula, used with an adjective or a predicate noun)
be
a part of their grandchild’s childhood years and will not be able to make a loving bond with grandchildren.
Furthermore
, putting parents
at
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in
nursing homes will devoid their families from the life experiences of the elderly.
This
can be a big loss for children in
family
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the family
since they will not have an old moral compass who can be their
support
while keeping them on the right path with the older gentleman / lady’s
age
old wisdom. In conclusion,
although
care
homes can provide significant
ameneties
things that make you comfortable and at ease
amenities
and peer
support
for the elderly, the importance of physical presence of
old
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older
people in the family for their own mental fitness and the value of their experiences for the children in the family unit should not be
understimated
assign too low a value to
underestimated
.
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Topic Vocabulary:
  • Professional care
  • Medical attention
  • Trained staff
  • Social interaction
  • Combat loneliness
  • Safety and security
  • Relief for families
  • Loss of autonomy
  • Emotional impact
  • Cost
  • Financial strain
  • Quality of care
  • Neglect and abuse
  • Detachment from family
  • Mental wellbeing
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