Topic: You recently came across an advertisement that you think your friend would like. Write a letter to your friend. In your letter: •Explain where you saw the advertisement. •Describe the product. •Explain why you think it would be useful for your friend.

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Hello dear Sarah, After talking to you yesterday I came across an advertisement for a job vacancy exactly related to what you were looking for. If I am not mistaken It was on LinkedIn on the page of a professor who is looking for a temporary teaching assistant.

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your timing and plan to stay here only for a year in Tehran,

this

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would be a perfect opportunity to spend your time and advance your expertise to enhance your CV as well. The explanation for

this

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assistantship was emphasizing the timing and the professor’s requirement of staying long shifts in the chemistry laboratory until 8 pm.

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in the description box he mentioned that the candidate must not have any respiratory health condition

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exposure to chemicals in the laboratory rounds I hope

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letter helps you find your desired position as soon as possible. Kind regards, Narges

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task achievement

Consider adding a bit more detail about why the job might align with your friend's skills or experience.

coherence and cohesion

Make sure to transition smoothly from one idea to the next to improve the overall flow of the letter.

coherence and cohesion

The letter is well-structured, with a clear greeting and closing.

task achievement

You maintained a friendly and supportive tone throughout the letter.

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meeting the goal of 3 or fewer
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Overall Band Score

Coherence and Cohesion: 7.0

Logical structure

Single idea per paragraph

Greeting and closing

Accurate linking words

Variety in linking words

Lexical resource: 9.0

Varied vocabulary

Accurate spelling & word formation

Grammatical Range: 9.0

Mix of complex & simple sentences

Clear and correct grammar

Task Achievement: 7.0

Complete response

Suitable writing tone

Appropriate word count

7 paragraphs

150 words

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