The older generations tend to have very traditional ideas about how people should live, think and behave. However, some people believe that these ideas are not helpful in preparing younger generations for modern life. To what extent do you agree or disagree with this view?
In the modern world, there is an opinion that the ideas of older generation regarding to the lifestyle of the younger generation are not beneficial, because they are not considered modern trends and changes.
However
, others feel that their ideas are very conservative, and it is unnecessary to share these ideas with them. Personally, I reckon that there should be a balance between the old traditions and modern behaviour.
There is no denying that the younger people should take the old tradition into consideration, because they are essential to value and maintain the national identity. It is widely known that due to national identity, many countries, such
as Japan and South Korea, are developing. In this
regard, the majority of individuals tend to believe that the ideas of older generations are viable in the modern life. A good illustration of this
is Japan, where citizens hold very strict traditions, however
, advanced in technology.
On the other hand
, there is an opinion that such
kinds of ideas and behaviour are not beneficial for the younger people. This
is because, the life is developing faster than it is used to be, and older people are not capable to overcome new challenges, because they need new methods. To illustrate, many elderly are not able to deal with advanced technologies. As a result
, they cannot educate young people properly.
In conclusion, although
many individuals tend to think that in order to achieve high results in the modern life, people should be open for a new lifestyle, others believe that accomplish high results, is possible, if the individuals keep their traditions. Personally, I reckon in order to find a peace and quite, people should find a point of tradeoff among
these two.Suggestion
between
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