The international committee should act immediately to ensure that all countries reduce fossil fuels, such as gas and oil. Do you agree or disagree?
More and more people reckon that the using of fossil fuels from wholly nations should be reduced by restricted rules of the international
comission
. I partly agree with an organization of people (or countries) involved in a pact or treaty
coalition
commission
this
assertion, while it may be true in the case of some societies, other seems to be depend
so much on the resources of Suggestion
to depend
this
industry.
On the one hand, fossil fuels play an important rule in the economy of many countries. They are raw materials to create some essential products like chemical fertilizers, pesticides and pharmaceuticals… It is estimated that all over the world consume about 95 million fossil fuels per day. That is
a consequence of its convenience and low price. For example
, in 2019, about 79% of US energy production came from fossil fuels and 80% its energy consumption originated from this
industry.
On the other hand
, the overexploitation
and use of these fuels are having negative impacts on the environment. To be more specific, the burning of gas or coal is a major cause of global warming which create carbon dioxide. This
action contributing to the increase of CO2 in atmosphere greatly. Furthermore
, offshore exploration and oil transport disturbs the marine environment surround. For instances
, oil spill during the transportation process in Alaska 12 years ago had killed a huge number of marine life, mammals and made the Suggestion
instance
living
of people motionless for nearly 3 years. Suggestion
lives
Government
had taken a decade to restore that natural ecosystem. Suggestion
The government
Additionally
, the rise of temperature have reduce
the Arctic Ice cap to more than 2 million square Suggestion
reduced
kilometers
, which is larger than ever recorded.
In conclusion, due to the beneficial and important of fossil fuels for the a metric unit of length equal to 1000 meters (or 0.621371 miles)
kilometres
economic
, each government should have strict policies to ensure the proper exploitation and environmental protection.Suggestion
economy
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- firstly
- secondly
- thirdly
- in additional
- moreover
- also
- for example
- for instance
- therefore
- however
- although
- even though
- despite
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