Most of the urgent problems can only be solved with international cooperation. To what extent do you agree or disagree?

It is generally believed that the majority of urgent issues and disagreements can merely be tackled with global
cooperation
. I strongly agree with
this
idea. International
cooperation
plays a vital role in solving problems occurred in any country. In the modern era, the mentioned
cooperation
is promoted by unilateral agreements signed mostly between more than 150 countries. They are ratified by many states to cooperate in critical topics
such
as crime and punishment and protection of the environment. Take
for instance
, with the help of the unity between states, criminals transit to another country in order to escape from justice are caught without large operations and efforts.
Therefore
, it would be beneficial, especially in certain areas to cooperate internationally. Global
cooperation
also
acts as a deterrent,
in other words
, some disputable and controversial issues before they become an actual dispute are covered in the agreements as well. An interesting study conducted
last
year suggests that widespread regulations dissuade people from breaking the law. More, social cooperations help conserve world's cultural heritages.
Furthermore
, the deterrence saves our money and time as a country, and so a
dministrers
someone who administers a business
administrators
can focus on improving public services. In conclusion, international
cooperation
is an efficient means and works as a time and money saver. I believe
that is
crucial to overcome any problems and especially the urgent ones.
Submitted by pbayrak16 on

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