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Schools are no longer necessary because children can get so much information on the Internet and study at home. Agree or Disagree?

#schools #children #information #internet #study #home
Whether traditional education still
take
Suggestion
takes
 an irreplaceable role in learning path, while electronic devices are increasingly dominant has long been
controversal topic
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a controversial topic
controversial topic
controversy topic
 in the contemporary society. While there is a school of thought that agree with suggestion above, I am convinced that it might cause many disadvantages. One of the major factors explaining why I disagree with
this
 opinion is that school mentally plays a part as an extra home and there is more to enjoy at the
second
-family than just cramming theoretical subjects. In the traditional classrooms, students have a lot of more opportunities to thrive comprehensively with outdoor activities, build
great sense
Suggestion
a great sense
 of camaraderie with their pals and coaches which could master their interpersonal skills.
Therefore
, online study by staying at home and work with the computer all the time would encourage them to be self-
centered
being or placed in the center
centred
 and
insensative
not responsive to physical stimuli
insensitive
.
In addition
, there is another reason I want to notice is that well-experienced teachers can never be substituted by electronic devices. It is because the flooded messy information on the internet might cause a huge challenge to learners in terms of differentiating healthy from toxic
meterials
the tangible substance that goes into the makeup of a physical object
materials
material
 that it is essential to get orientation from related-field experts. If pupils get information on
untrusted
 websites without guiders, they could easily absorb inaccurate or useless knowledge. In conclusion, I am of the opinion that it is vital to study in a
tradition
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traditional
 classroom rather than a virtual classroom, it is not only because of the physical and mental growth but it
also
 due to the selective and proper education for our
next
 generation.
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