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In many western countries there is an increasing number of couples choosing to have no children. What are the advantages and disadvantages to couples having no children?

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In the contemporary era, younger generation wants to lead a happy activity by avoiding children. Some people believe that it is a wise decision while others opine that it has many drawbacks. In
this
 essay, I intend to discuss both the sides of the arguments. There are a few disadvantages of having a child.
First
 and foremost, kids are barriers for career growth. What I mean by, when you start thinking about children after marriage, one has to sacrifice their carrier in order to bring them into the earth.
In Addition
, the maintenance of the childhood has grown potentially. Parents have to bear the children's expenses and responsibility until they grow a certain age. They should be in a position to accept the kids.
Consequently
, they lose their jobs during pregnancy, which leads them to put in financial burdens.
On the other hand
, there is a plethora of advantages of having a child. In old ages, elders tend to say that no kids means no
life
. Living without infants is not possible for some parents as they feel like it is sedentary lifestyle few years after their marriage
.
Accept space
.
 Having a Childrens means you can always enjoy happily
life
 and you will never feel lonely when they are around you. If you start enjoying with the kids, one can forget their burdens which may arise in their
life
 and energize themselves. As they grow, you will have a hope in the future that they will support you in all the time and when you become old, they can be your strong support of
life
 during retirement period.
Moreover
, when the kids, marriage, you can cherish your moments with their kids. In conclusion, it is an individual mindset to have kids or not.
however
Suggestion
However
, it has both pros and cons. People have to decide based on their circumstance in their
life
. It is a boon for some people and bane for other people.
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