Friendships have become more important than family relationships.

Both family relationships and
friendship
are considered to be special to everyone. There is a lot of debate about which is more important. Many people believe that family is more important than friends.
However
, other people argue
also
place family relationships under
friendship
. In
this
essay, I will analyse all of the aspects of
this
argument. On the one hand, some people put their family in the
first
place because family is very important. The
first
reason is that family members are the people who will support and protect us unconditionally. At the time that we need help, they always stay beside us.
In addition
to
this
, they
also
share with you their experience.
For example
, in the family, our grandparents talked about their life in the past.
Then
, we can know the difference between the before lifestyle and present lifestyle. Mother can give us some advices when we are in difficult situations. When we have to face up with hard things, the love of family will become a strong motivation to encourage us.
In contrast
, some people think that
friendship
is more important as it is short lasting.We can make
friendship
with your classmates, colleagues at school and office.
However
, when we graduate or change our job, the friendships can be ended.
Secondly
, the distance of generations in the family can create different thinking.
Therefore
, it is believed that friends can understand us better than family members. Because of the same ages, we can have them same feeling with our friends.
Moreover
, to some people, making friends is a new world, they can have many
good experienced
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good, experienced
time, learn and explore many challenges.
Finally
, we often have a thought that our family members are always at home to wait for us while it is arduous to have good friends.
This
makes us think that
friendship
is more important than family relationships. In my view, the family relationship is more important than
friendship
because it is difficult to find really good friends. The family is the only place where spends unconditioned love with us and accepts thing, no matter what we do in the past or in the present.
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