1.You have joined a new job recently. Write to your friend about your new job. In your letter •describe the reason for quitting the previous job •show your excitement for a new job and other details •say about your salary package

Dear Aditi, How are you? I have been planning on writing to you for days but have been occupied
in
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the onboarding formalities of my new
job
. Yes, you heard it right. I have quit my old teaching
job
. I am feeling ecstatic to tell you about
this
new
job
of mine. I have accepted the position of junior editor for "The Times" newspaper. As you are already aware of my keen interest in journalism since graduation, I have always wanted to work in
this
industry. My old teaching
job
had not only become monotonous but
also
ineffective in terms of my personal and professional growth. It was high time I took the risk to switch to something I always longed for. Even though there is not much difference in the salary, the uncanny experiences of media and journalism are matchless. I am entitled to a joining bonus of $5K
along with
20 days of paid vacations annually. There is a lot I would like to talk about and can not wait to see you soon. Your Loving Friend, Anmol
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