Science and technical experts seem to be more valued by society than musicians and artists. To what extent do you agree?

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Science and
art
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are two strong pillars of the ultra-modern
society
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. While scientists and technological experts are thought to be valuable assets and much appreciated by
society
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nowadays. I ponder that musicians and other artists are equally valued in our
society
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. On the one hand, technological advancements have made human lives more convenient like never before.
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, day by day ongoing research in science field has resolved many mysteries around the universe.
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, the team of scientists
are continuously working
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is continuously working
in
medical science thereby
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the medical science, thereby
the medical science thereby
developing more vaccines and medicines to curb diseases and eventually increasing the average lifespan of human lives.
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,
discovery
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the discovery
of quinine for malaria was a revolution which
help
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helps
in controlling the pandemic.
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Therefore scientists
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Therefore, scientists
and experts
seems
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seem
to be of greater
important
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importance
to the
society
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as they have influenced almost every aspect of human lives.
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, musicians and artist are no less valued by
society
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. In fact,
tlhey
people in general
they
are acting as a great stress buster for human in
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hectic lifestyle schedule.
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the way of appreciation and taste of
music
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and
arts
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the arts
have been changed over the years, people still love stalwarts of these fields, as it clear example is given by the huge fan following of musician A. R.
Rehmen
of or relating to or derived from Rome (especially ancient Rome)
Roman
Riemann
and painter M. F. Hussain.
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to
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, the surging trend being part of reality shows
Showcasting
a setting in which something can be displayed to best effect
showcasing
Show casting
art
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forms like dancing and singing rather than being spectators of these programs, shows that public values
art
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and
music
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same as other fields. In
conclusion though
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conclusion, though
the contribution made by scientists and technical experts
are
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is
significant for developing
societies but
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societies, but
for
cognitive development
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the cognitive development
of human minds the role of
art
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and
music
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cannot be ignored. According to me, all fields
likescience
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like science
and technology.,
a rts
studies intended to provide general knowledge and intellectual skills (rather than occupational or professional skills)
arts
and
music
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all have their own value and own place for the betterment and development of the
society
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.
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