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Talking about my primary goal, my main goal is to live in Halifax Canada. Halifax is an amazing city in the west of Canada near the beach and with a good economy. The reason that I want to move there is because I want to provide a better lifestyle for my family like my son student in a good school of a good education and go out in a safe place without being scared as I am in Brazil. To achieve that I have been studying English every day and saving money, in the

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year my wife and I will do the IELTS and we hope to achieve a CLB 9.

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Overall Band Score

Coherence and Cohesion: 4.0

Logical structure

Introduction & conclusion present

Supported main points

Accurate linking words

Variety in linking words

Lexical resource: 9.0

Varied vocabulary

Accurate spelling & word formation

Grammatical Range: 9.0

Mix of complex & simple sentences

Clear and correct grammar

Task Achievement: 4.0

Complete response

Clear & comprehensive ideas

Relevant & specific examples

Appropriate word count

3 paragraphs

112 words

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Topic Vocabulary:

bilingual
multilingual
fluency
communicate
cognitive skills
cultural awareness
opportunities
globalized world
job market
interact
linguistic abilities
cultural exchange
language proficiency
language barrier
foreign travel
personal growth
academic achievement
self-confidence
enhance
cross-cultural communication

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Write about a goal you want to achieve and how you will achieve it.

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Some people think high school graduates should travel or work for a period of time instead of going directly to study at university. Do the Advantages outweigh disadvantages?

Some people say that all people should stay in full-time education until they are least 18 years old. to what extent do you agrre or disagree?

Many museums and historic sites are mainly visited by tourists rather than by local residents. What are the causes of this? What can be done for museums and historic sites to attract more local visitors?

With the development of online communication, people will never be alone and will always be able to make new friends. To what extend do you agree or disagree?