Some people say that the main environmental problem of our times is the loss of particular species plants and animals. Others say that there are more important environmental problems.

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Environment plays a crucial role in everyday human life, but now a days, we could see many changes in the environment. Some people believe that, there are environmental problems due to loss of rare
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and animals and some feel that, it happens for other important reasons. Despite of both statements, we are experiencing many environ problems in these present days.
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, human population would play a major role for these environmental problems. From past few decades, the growth of humans is increasing rapidly. Humans are destroying green lands and forest for their mankind, by these many
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got extinct. The percentage of the forests are getting reduced and without knowing people are cutting down
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trees. Many
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plants have special advantages, some plants are best for homeopathic medicine, which is quite popular in India and some plants are rich in oxygen. At the same time, there many other problems of environmental pollution. Among them, the few are, the pollution which is released by humans from industries and chemical factories are directly reversed into oceans and lakes.
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used as a dumped yard for many chemical factories, by
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we are losing many rare sea creatures. The plastic which is dumped into the seas and oceans are resulting to the death of many sea animals.
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, recently an incident happened in south India, there was gas leakage in one of the chemical factory, which is affected across 5miles resulting in death of many humans and some fell sick. Not only humans, many crop fields and plants got banished. In my opinion, we as humans created high damage to the environment. At least now, it is our responsibility to protect our nature and wildlife. Because, in return we only get benefited.
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Topic Vocabulary:
  • biodiversity
  • ecosystem services
  • genetic diversity
  • food chains
  • climate change
  • habitat destruction
  • pollution
  • overpopulation
  • deforestation
  • water scarcity
  • holistic approach
  • environmental sustainability
  • irreversible loss
  • threatened species
  • conservation efforts
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