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Some scientist believe that there are intelligent life forms on other planets and messages should be sent to contact them. Other scientists think it is a bad idea and would be dangerous. Discuss both views and give your own opinion.

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There are so many planets around the world.
Its
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It's
 been a very large argument about the existing of any other form of
life
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 out there. In
this
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 essay I'll discuss with you some of these arguments and what is my opinion. There are so many planets, stars and moons all over the
space
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.
First
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 of all, some people say that there are many planets out there like our planet, so why wouldn'
t
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 be there any other creatures.
Second
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, some of them believes that we already have been in
attach
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attaching
 with those kind of lives, and most of the doubts are because of the very secret area in South America that called area 51.
Third
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, some other people left
there
of them or themselves
their
 imagination to control their thoughts, that's why many of them won'
t
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even believe even
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even believe
 the real evidence. These are some of the very common thoughts of the people who believes in the existing of other forms of
life
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 out there. These days there are so many great technology around the world and it's hard to believe in things without any real
ecidence
your basis for belief or disbelief; knowledge on which to base belief
evidence
.
Firstly
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, nowadays, the technology had connected us to everything that we could've
imagine
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imagined
, people thinks that if we can reach the people across the world in a
secondly
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, it's impossible not to find anything outside the Earth.
Second
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, people believe in a
compant
an institution created to conduct business
company
 that calls
Nasa which
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NASA, which
NASA which
nose which
noise which
 is specialized in everything
that
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that's
 connected to the
space
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, they had
visit
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visited
 the moon, they have many spaceships were sent to discover the
space
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, and yet there still nothing
untill
up to, before the time
until
 now. These are some of the
argument
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arguments
 about why there couldn'
t
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 be possible to believe in other forms of
life
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 to be existing. In conclusion, I have set out for you the arguments about the existing of any other form of
life
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 out there in the
space
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. To sum up, many people
beleive
accept as true; take to be true
believe
 in other forms of
life
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 because they cannot imagine that they are the only form of
life
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 in
this
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 major
space
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, while others believe in technology and the real evidence. In my opinion, there could be other forms of
life
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 out
there but
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there, but
 maybe they are so far away to reach, or they are so close but we can'
t
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 see them.
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Use cohesive linking words accurately and appropriately

Linking words are very important in your essay.

To score effectively on your IELTS exam, you should make an effort to implement short concise sentences coupled with linking words.

Almost every sentence in your essay should have a linking word of some sort.

In fact, the only sentences that can omit linking words are your background sentence and thesis.

Linking word examples:

  • firstly
  • secondly
  • thirdly
  • in additional
  • moreover
  • also
  • for example
  • for instance
  • therefore
  • however
  • although
  • even though
  • despite

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Topic Vocabulary:
  • extraterrestrial
  • technological advancement
  • human progress
  • exchange of knowledge
  • pressing problems
  • environmental issues
  • broadening of humanity’s horizon
  • external existence
  • collaborative
  • security threat
  • dominate
  • unpredictability
  • malevolent intentions
  • colonization
  • exploitation
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