In several years many languages die out. Some say it is not important because if we speak fewer languages life would be easier. Do you agree or disagree?

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The United Nations estimates that approximately 6,500 languages are spoken in the world

today

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. By the end of

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century, many linguists estimate that over half of those 6,500 languages will be gone. Some opine that it is futile to save these languages because it is more convenient to have fewer languages

today

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. I agree with

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view. The reason why the possibility of a

language

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dying raises so much concern for sociologists is that

language

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is directly related to

culture

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. It is said that, "When a

language

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dies, a

culture

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dies".

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, these languages are a significant part of their speaker's identify. Beyond preserving

culture

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and using

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as a part of the speaker's identity, a very practical reason for wanting to save a dying

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is that archaeologists and anthropologist can get a wealth of information about a society from its

language

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. If a

language

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dies out, so does our access to direct knowledge about its customs, folk tales and vocabulary for describing the world.

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, languages that lose their communicative purposes and are abandoned by speakers should disappear from the public arena. The truth of "when a

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dies, a

culture

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dies" does not imply the truth when a

language

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is saved, a

culture

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is so saved. The change of

culture

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is a normal part of the law of change we should welcome

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change. The only thing that can be achieved by saving a

language

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is for intra-linguistic studies and nothing more.

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, it is irrefutable that what actually kills languages is the choices of the speakers. The moment the speakers of a

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realize that their

language

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does not have a global functionality, they begin to abandon it. In

today

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's global village, it is far more convenient to have a few languages. There is better communication and

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more promising job prospects worldwide with fewer languages. Even the technology of

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is more comfortable to learn with fewer languages. So,

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languages that have limited potential at the global stage, and they

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come under threat or even die, it would be better to let them die. There is no need to preserve them. In conclusion, I believe that, the idea of saving threatened languages sounds good, but it is difficult to achieve because the speakers have a right to shift to another

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happens, there is no logical basis for saving a past linguistic behaviour. What is more, globalization will continually lead to

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shift.

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trend is not likely to abate.

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, it is not important to save endangered languages.

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Introduction & conclusion present

Supported main points

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Variety in linking words

Lexical resource: 8.0

Varied vocabulary

Accurate spelling & word formation

Grammatical Range: 9.0

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Clear and correct grammar

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