The older generations tend to have very traditional ideas about how people should live, think and behave. However, some people believe that these ideas are not helpful in preparing younger generations for modern life. To what extent do you agree or disagree with this view?

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The majority of elders

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are

conventional about

life

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style which included attitude, old time understanding while other people do not support to act with traditional behaviour and culture, because it is not beneficial for the youth. I will elaborate both on views in order to adapt modernity. In modern

life

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, some old people

critize

find fault with; express criticism of; point out real or perceived flaws

criticize

the younger's treatment. They think about the best way is

ongoing conventional lifestyle

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an ongoing conventional lifestyle

, especially for younger individuals.

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to say, youth should keep to preserve cultural heritage to act like as the past according to their idea.

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, the majority of the teenagers who live in a small town called as Bünyan, have moved to the cities. The adult residents have not wanted to change their location, because they have afraid of losing their cultural heritage and behaviour.

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, none of the younger generations have not separate of their ethical belief.

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, many young individuals should adapt to the modern

life

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without thinking any

critism

disapproval expressed by pointing out faults or shortcomings

criticism

. The mixed culture is the essential necessary nowadays. When the human-being is respectful each other, nobody does not disturb.

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, in

this

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type of place, everybody can alter to be more open-minded, indulgent and knowledge about ethical change.

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, every year many students initiate to study abroad. International

partnerships supply

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partnerships, supply

to keep continuing to be friendly not only personal,

also

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national. I, briefly, agree to feel free and

life

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requirement

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required

for having a healthy character. In conclusion, elders can preserve their traditional understanding,

however

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the youth need to be free in the modern

life

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. The fundamental thing is

fell

mat together and make felt-like

felt

to belong to the world citizens.

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Topic Vocabulary:

Traditional ideas
Modern life
Younger generations
Stability
Guidance
Foundation
Cultural heritage
Rigid gender roles
Resistance to new technologies
Adaptability
Innovative solutions
Respecting elders
Maintaining family bonds
Stifle progress
Fusion of ideas
Outdated values

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Use a variety of complex and simple sentences

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