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Today, education abroad has become more accessible and an increasing number of people send their children to study in other countries. However, this trend has its detractors. I firmly believe that professionals outweigh the cons and we will examine the two below. Give reasons for your answer and include relevant examples from your own knowledge or experience.

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In the 21st century, it became common to go to another
country
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 to
study
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 is easier today, because it has become more accessible. Since the children are young, many parents plan to send them abroad when they grew up. Like everything in life,
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 has its advantages and disadvantages, which will be discussed in
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 essay. It is indisputable that when a person has the chance to
study
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 abroad, it will provide him with several opportunities in the future. Even those who have completed their studies return to their
country
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 of origin, have much more to offer in a job opening, which ends up giving you an advantage over other competitors who have never studied in another
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.
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, there is the question about the difficulties that
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 teenager will face in another
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. They will be away from family, away from friends, in a strange place, having to speak a language
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 not their mother tongue, and having to develop and learn. For these reasons many people who go to live and
study
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 abroad, end up not taking it and returning to their
country
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 even before completing their studies.
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 why the decision to
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 abroad cannot be made only by the parents, the child or adolescent must be able to express an opinion and participate in
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 decision. Concluding the act of studying abroad, in another
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country it
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country, it
 has to be the result of a lot of research, conversation and planning. The teenager or child needs to be psychologically prepared while he is still in his
country
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 to preparing his communication, his mastery of the foreign language and his emotional. Being away from the family will often be difficult, but if
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 was a joint decision,
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 the most correct thing is to focus on the benefits, and the advantages that
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 experience will bring you in the future.

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