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Internet crime is increasing rapidly as more and more people are using internet for financial transactions. What can be done to tackle this problem?

#internet #crime #people #transactions
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Life without the
internet
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 can't be possible nowadays. But day by day
crime
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 is increased with the help of
internet
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. Everything is digital nowadays and to do some financial transaction people always take help of
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internet but
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internet, but
 some criminals taking advantage of
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internet
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the internet
 and
crime
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 is increasing rapidly. Let's discuss about
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 topic in
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 essay. Everyone dose online shopping, transfer money, pay bills through
internet
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 banking. But there are some fraudulent and criminal activities happened with the help of
internet
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. It's very common to use of
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internet
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the internet
 for financial transactions.
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, To stop that fraud, people have to be very careful while doing the transaction. There are lots of options available in the market for
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 security like, firewalls, antivirus available to prevent suspicious activity.
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, Banking sector always in trouble because of suspicious activities. Money laundering is the biggest fraud happens very often nowadays.
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, People always have to be very careful to do financial transactions. They should not use public wifi, they should not disclose the SMS code or pin number for banking transactions to anyone. Criminal dose calls to get the security code for financial transaction. Each and every financial institution should spread awareness for any scam calls, fraud activities. They should run free programs to stop
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crime
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. In conclusion, People should be aware and get knowledge about using of
internet
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 financial services to prevent
crime
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.
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