Many people spend a lot of money on clothes, haircuts and beauty products to enhance their appearance.Some people think that it is a good way to spend money, while others think there is a better way to spend it.Discuss both views and give your opinion.

In

this

era of modernization, it is becoming a topic of discussion that which is the better

way

to spend the

money

. Some folks consider that using

money

for clothes, haircuts and beauty products is the best

way

to show the appearance, while others do not agree with it and they believe that there is a better

wayway

how something is done or how it happens

way

way way

to spend the

money

.

This

essay will discuss these both views along with my opinion.

To begin

with, in

this

country

of freedom, everyone has their own right to choose whatever they want.

That is

why, they think to spend

money

on their appearance is the correct use of

money

. They might think that it us their decision to use their

money

in

this

way

, so no

one

can ask them anything.

For instance

, if

one

person is making

money

after lots of hard work,

then

it would be his decision to choose the

way

in which he wants to spend the

money

.

However

, there are other more important

way

to spend

money

. The people can donate some of their income to help the poor children for their education, clothes and their well-being.

This

could

also

improve the system and the poverty in our

country

.

For example

, if

one

person thinks about to take the responsibility of

one

poor child for his education,

then

all in our

country

will be educated and smart. To conclude,

this

essay discussed that how the

money

can improve the system of the

country

. In my opinion, I think balance is very important in everything, so

one

should make a balance and,

then

decide that what is wrong and what is right?