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Drivers should pay a fee in city street when there is a heavy traffic. To what extent do you agree or disagree.

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Traffic is tremendously shooting up all around the cities, especially in the local streets. So, those who are driving their vehicles, have to pay some money at the time of busy traffic. I am somewhat agree to the statement written above. Let's discuss in the coming paragraphs. Foremost, road congestion is enormously increasing day by day, because everyone is driving their car, not only for the long distance, but for the short distance too. Due to
this
, the congestion in the public streets is shooting up and create a lot of noise and pollution.
For example
, roads near to the hospitals and meditation area, should be less busy as compared to the others. As, the noise pollution created by the vehicles is extremely dangerous for the patients admitted in the hospitals. The cause of heavy traffic is maybe that the parking and driving in the local area is free of cost and due to the fact, people are not bothered and take it casually. To solve the problem, some steps should be taken towards
this
, for the betterment of the cities and the local areas.
Secondly
,
such
 situations of the traffic congestions in the city areas are mainly because of the local vehicles. To overcome, some sort of rules and regulations should be applied,
for instance
, parking fees.
Moreover
, the amount of money may vary according to the size of the vehicle and the timings, for how long one can need the parking space. Apparently, the space and parking fees for the workers of the shops in the market should be less than the normal charge. In conclusion, to overcome the road congestion, fees should be applied for safety measures.
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Include an introduction and conclusion

A conclusion is essential for IELTS writing task 2. It is more important than most people realise. You will be penalised for missing a conclusion in your IELTS essay.

The easiest paragraph to write in an essay is the conclusion paragraph. This is because the paragraph mostly contains information that has already been presented in the essay – it is just the repetition of some information written in the introduction paragraph and supporting paragraphs.

The conclusion paragraph only has 3 sentences:

  • Summary
  • Restatement of thesis
  • Prediction or recommendation

Example:

To summarize, a robotic teacher does not have the necessary disciple to properly give instructions to students and actually works to retard the ability of a student to comprehend new lessons. Therefore, it is clear that the idea of running a classroom completely by a machine cannot be supported. After thorough analysis on this subject, it is predicted that the adverse effects of the debate over technology-driven teaching will always be greater than the positive effects, and because of this, classroom teachers will never be substituted for technology.

Start your conclusion with a linking phrase. Here are some examples:

  • In conclusion
  • To conclude
  • To summarize
  • Finally
  • In a nutshell
  • In general

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