Some people say that it is impossible to live comfortably in big cities. What problems are faced by the people living with in big cities? What solutions can be taken to solve those problems??
It is often said that in the sprawling city is too difficult to live in an appropriate way.
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issue is enhancing the migration from the rural areas and provides the jobs in backward area as a viable solution followed by a reasoned conclusion.
The main cause of the bad conditions of living in the cities is being overcrowded. Due to lack of amenities in the rural area, people are moving to the metro cities, Linking Words
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as for university education, jobs, medical treatment and so on. In the cities, individuals have own cars and bumper-to-bumper traffic is being increased. The volume of traffic has raised the pollution in the towns. Linking Words
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pollution leads to serious health issues like asthma, respiratory issues, heart diseases so forth. Linking Words
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, Delhi is the most polluted city at Linking Words
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time. Because of smoky air, people are using the mask for filtering the air. In fact, Delhi is the Linking Words
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city, where shop is open for buying the oxygen.
The main practical solution of Linking Words
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problem is the government should provide the facilities in the rural area. In Linking Words
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way, people will less migrate into the cities. An effective advertising campaign could warn of the dangers of more vehicles and overuse of it and hopefully raise awareness amongst the public. The raised awareness of the problem would lead changes in the quality of living in the cities. Linking Words
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, China has started the policy odd and even means one day an odd number of cars only use in Linking Words
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country and vice versa. Linking Words
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policy gives many fruitful results to overcome the pollution as well as traffic in china.
In summary, the current bad conditions of cities have been caused by migration and transportation and with the help of adverts and appropriate policy on how to become healthy life in the citiesLinking Words
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Use cohesive linking words accurately and appropriately
Linking words are very important in your essay.
To score effectively on your IELTS exam, you should make an effort to implement short concise sentences coupled with linking words.
Almost every sentence in your essay should have a linking word of some sort.
In fact, the only sentences that can omit linking words are your background sentence and thesis.
Linking word examples:
- firstly
- secondly
- thirdly
- in additional
- moreover
- also
- for example
- for instance
- therefore
- however
- although
- even though
- despite