Some people say that money is the best gift for teenagers. Others disagree. Discuss both views and give your opinion?
As the quality of life keeps improving, more and more parents are doing their best to earn more
money
for their children as they believe that money
is the best present for them. While I partially agree with this
point of view, I insist that money
is not everything for children.
On the one hand, everyone knows that money
is becoming more and more important to a family, especially children. First
of all, when they start to go to college, parents have to pay a large mount of money
for the tuition. In addition
, modern technologies, such
as computers, smart phones and tablets, also
increase the living expenses of teenagers, because they are popular among young people. However
, these high-tech products are upgrading rapidly and their costs are also
rising. Therefore
, it is understandable for some people to claim that money
is the best gift for young ones.
On the other hand
, even if money
is playing a significant role in teenagers' lives, it does not mean everything. For instance
, some parents might spend so much time earning incomes that they neglect another thing which is also
critical to
their children, love. Teenagers grown up without sufficient love from their families might not enjoy a happy and active life as others. Suggestion
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Additionally
, teenagers who are spoiled with money
might not realize the significance and difficulty of making money
. Instead
, they might spend the money
from their parents for granted and they would develop an unhealthy outlook of money
.
To sum up, money
is important, but it is not the best gift for teenagers. I believe that people could reward teenagers with money
as a form of praise or encouragement when they have a good behaviour or performance. In this
way, they could teach teenagers the importance of making money
by themselves, instead
of thinking about how to spend money
all the time.Submitted by 383035006 on
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