Some people think that mobile phones are harmful for children while others disagree. Discuss both views and give your opinion
The role of mobile phones in children's lives is always a debatable topic, where some support the notion and other remain dissent. According to me judicious use under strict monitoring is always making these gadgets a non replaceable asset in
child
's life.
On the one hand, some argue that gaming applications in smart phones not only waste their time, but also
over time children become addictive to them. Through a survey it has proven that it puts the detrimental effect on child
health and mental well being. For instance
, games like PUBG making the younger generation aggressive
and solace for the surroundings. Accept comma addition
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Further
, they say that internet option in handy devices many times distract young minds from studies and lure them towards the dark web and growing minds, not able to differentiate between good or bad and may get trapped in the wrong does which spoil their future.
On the other hand
, supporters argue that these gadgets has lessen the child
crime rate. For example
, the WhatsApp live feature has made parents monitor the track the present geographical location of young one's. Further
, they say educational apps has widened the scope of learning horizons and made all the information available in pocket. In addition
to this
they also
feel that advanced feature like parental control and child
lock has made the customization possible and parents can check what a child
has explored in the device. This
precise monitoring and full utilisation of technology has open new doors for learning for students.
In conclusion, I ponder that every advancements have two facets, it's up to individual that which face one going to adopt and explore. I strongly believe that If mobile phones are used under strict monitoring by parents and teachers
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teachers, then
then
these will surely act as a boon for children's safety and cognitive development.Submitted by Pallavi on
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