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Nowadays some people think that public libraries are not necessary, while others disagree. Discuss both views and give your own opinion.

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It is often argued that the government-run libraries are not of much use these days. People believed that was unnecessary. Of course, many people disagree with
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 view. In
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internet
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 has made a whole lot easier that going to a
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. If you have a device like a smart phone or a computer and an
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 connection, you can find everything that you want on it,
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, whenever you want to know something which is about the technology search it on the
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 immediately,
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, the information on the
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 is relatively new whereas libraries have an impressive collection of old manuscripts;
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, it is able to share it via any social media that you want to share it to whoever you want.
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, the state libraries are several information which is not have on the
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 as the thesis that are not available online because many older manuscripts are stored at the
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 which are not available online.
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, the state-run
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 provided a quiet environment where both student and whoever can read without facing any distractions. In conclusion, even if the technology has developed more than in the past, they are still needed because the information had stored in a
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 always reliable and accurate;
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, many older books and manuscripts which are not available online. And the place to read books are necessary for the present.
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    • Sentence 2 - Detailed background statement
    • Sentence 3 - Thesis
    • Sentence 4 - Outline sentence
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    • Sentence 1 - Topic sentence
    • Sentence 2 - Example
    • Sentence 3 - Discussion
    • Sentence 4 - Conclusion
  • Paragraph 3 - Second supporting paragraph
    • Sentence 1 - Topic sentence
    • Sentence 2 - Example
    • Sentence 3 - Discussion
    • Sentence 4 - Conclusion
  • Paragraph 4 - Conclusion
    • Sentence 1 - Summary
    • Sentence 2 - Restatement of thesis
    • Sentence 3 - Prediction or recommendation

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