Around the world children learn English language as a second language at school. however, in some places they also learn at Kinder garden. Discuss the advantages and disadvantages of learning at kinder garden?
In some formal education,
English
is taught as a second Use synonyms
language
at school, Use synonyms
however
, it is frequently met that Linking Words
children
learn it in kindergarten. The advantage of learning it earlier is people could master it quicker Use synonyms
whereas
the disadvantage is they could be confused about both Linking Words
languages
that they learn parallelly. Use synonyms
This
essay will discuss both the benefits and drawbacks of it.
One of the advantages of learning secondary Linking Words
language
in playgroup is Use synonyms
children
are able to speak fluently and use broader varied vocabularies. Use synonyms
This
is because as a child, their memory is still developing and it is the right time to teach them various knowledge including Linking Words
English
. 75% of Use synonyms
children
at International schools in Indonesia, Use synonyms
for example
, are able to speak Linking Words
English
fluently because they start to learn it at a young age and they use it daily, especially in school. Use synonyms
Due to
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this
fact, it benefits them to learn Linking Words
English
at Use synonyms
such
a young age.
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On the other hand
, other perspectives agree that it could burden them to learn a second Linking Words
language
because they are still in the process of learning their first Use synonyms
language
. Use synonyms
This
is because kindergarten students still mastering their mother tongue and teaching them other Linking Words
languages
can confuse them and Use synonyms
consequently
, they could not be fluent in any of them or mix them up. Many artists in Indonesia, Linking Words
for instance
, who were born and raised in another country are not fluent in both their Linking Words
languages
because they have not finished learning one Use synonyms
language
but they are forced to be good in other Use synonyms
languages
. Use synonyms
Therefore
, it would be better if Linking Words
children
learn a secondary Use synonyms
language
once they are fluent in using their mother tongue.
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To conclude
, learning Linking Words
English
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language
earlier benefits them Use synonyms
due to
the fact that a child has a better memory than an adult. Linking Words
Nevertheless
, its drawbacks Linking Words
such
as decreasing their ability to master their mother Linking Words
language
are a topic to be considered.Use synonyms
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