Around the world children learn English language as a second language at school. however, in some places they also learn at Kinder garden. Discuss the advantages and disadvantages of learning at kinder garden?
In some formal education,
English
is taught as a second language
at school, however
, it is frequently met that children
learn it in kindergarten. The advantage of learning it earlier is people could master it quicker whereas
the disadvantage is they could be confused about both languages
that they learn parallelly. This
essay will discuss both the benefits and drawbacks of it.
One of the advantages of learning secondary language
in playgroup is children
are able to speak fluently and use broader varied vocabularies. This
is because as a child, their memory is still developing and it is the right time to teach them various knowledge including English
. 75% of children
at International schools in Indonesia, for example
, are able to speak English
fluently because they start to learn it at a young age and they use it daily, especially in school. Due to
this
fact, it benefits them to learn English
at such
a young age.
On the other hand
, other perspectives agree that it could burden them to learn a second language
because they are still in the process of learning their first language
. This
is because kindergarten students still mastering their mother tongue and teaching them other languages
can confuse them and consequently
, they could not be fluent in any of them or mix them up. Many artists in Indonesia, for instance
, who were born and raised in another country are not fluent in both their languages
because they have not finished learning one language
but they are forced to be good in other languages
. Therefore
, it would be better if children
learn a secondary language
once they are fluent in using their mother tongue.
To conclude
, learning English
as a secondary language
earlier benefits them due to
the fact that a child has a better memory than an adult. Nevertheless
, its drawbacks such
as decreasing their ability to master their mother language
are a topic to be considered.Submitted by ru.kabiru.biru on
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