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Some people believe that environmental problems should be solved on a global scale while other believes it is better to deal with them nationally. Discuss both sides and give your opinion

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It is commonly believed that issues related to climate should be discussed at an international level, whilst other side of the coin argues that every country should work on the national level for the improvement of the atmosphere.
This
 essay agrees with the later notion that environmental issues should be discussed worldwide. The essay will discuss both points of views. It is quite clear that the whole status of the earth is deteriorating with each passing day. There are many contributing factors to it
I
reflexive form of "me"
myself
.e. Industries waste materials, water pollution, air pollution and hazardous gas emission from nuclear plants, which has caused irreversible damage to the planet and its inhabitants.
In other words
,
this
 current situation needs global reforms.
For example
, the UN can impose sanctions on countries, who are not abiding the by international environmental law, because the consequences are faced by every specie living on earth.
On the other hand
, many argue that environmental protection issues should be dealt by the countries themselves. It is a very wise notion if countries can sense their responsibility towards environmental problems and can work on their own for the improvement of the atmosphere and climate regardless of the price that may cost them.
For example
, countries can ban the use of plastic bottles and shopping bags which are not climate friendly, and can introduce biodegradable alternatives
this
 way they can help improving the
environment
 of earth. In conclusion, while the international regulatory bodies I.e. The UN can call for global reforms and force countries to work towards sustainable
environment
, some still feel that countries should take responsibility and solve issues of
environment
Suggestion
the environment
 on their own.
However
, it is better to discuss and solve issues related to
environment
Suggestion
the environment
 on an international level because sustainability is required by every nation.
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Topic Vocabulary:
  • international cooperation
  • sovereign rights
  • Paris Agreement
  • climate change
  • ocean pollution
  • collective measures
  • economic interests
  • political will
  • enforcement issues
  • free-riders
  • tailor-made solutions
  • transboundary pollution
  • resource constraints
  • global frameworks
  • national efforts
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