Throughout history, people have dreamed of living in a perfect society, but they have not agreed on what an ideal society would be like. What do you think is the most important element of a perfect society in this modern world? How can people work towards achieving an ideal society?

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Perfect
society
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is
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dream
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the dream
of every human being from every decade and era. Everyone has their own thoughts and dreams of a perfect
society
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On one hand, many people think that for a perfect
society
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education is the key.
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, the idea to achieve a perfect
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society education
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society, education
is the main key. If everyone will be educated in the
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, we can achieve the goal of perfect
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, everyone should have a basic living for a
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society
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.
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, to achieve
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evey
(used of count nouns) each and all of the members of a group considered singly and without exception
every
human being
have
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has
to contribute
towards to build
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to build towards
a
dream
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society
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.
Government
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The government
should bring the projects in action to reduce the poverty rate, like
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they can help poor people
to get
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get
the basic needs on everyday basis.
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, to achieve
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goal all people of
society
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should
contiribite
bestow a quality on
contribute
, if we all work together definitely we can achieve
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dream
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, it's a
difficult but
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difficult, but
not impossible to achieve. In my opinion, to achieve
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dream
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the important element is equality, basic education, basic living needs and every person should contribute towards
this
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dream
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to achieve.
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Topic Vocabulary:
  • equality
  • inclusivity
  • socioeconomic status
  • empowers
  • critical thinking
  • innovative solutions
  • legal system
  • justice
  • environmental sustainability
  • sustainable living
  • civic engagement
  • governance
  • address the needs
  • effective
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