Today, the high sales of popular consumer goods reflect the power of advertising and not the real needs of the society in which they are sold. To what extent do you agree or disagree?

Nowadays, demand trends of some in demand goods have significantly changed during the past decades. Some people believe that
is because of announcement industry, and an individual’s needs do have an effective role in
concept. In
essay, I partly agree with
view and people’s choice as an effective factor should be taken into account. On the one hand, the human is free in his choices, while some external variables can influence on his decision. Generally speaking, each person has an independent character to make a decision.
For example
, in the fashion world, a shirt could become as a trendy fashion item in the market in a short period and would be attractive to the society
. Suddenly by changing the people’s taste
merchandise will be omitted from favourite list
On the other hand
, advertising has a significant role in making some goods popular. Because the most important item which can effect on the society’s opinion to buy specific goods, is literature.
For instance
, imagine an advertising campaign which is held for sale and promote a new ice cream, and their target are children and youth. They use several tricks
as creative ad TV advert or a famous cartoon character in the form of toys or stand up comedy to attract children’s opinion. In conclusion,
people have
freedom to buy their real needs without any enforcement, the power of publication is an undeniable fact which has been having huge effects on the society’s taste and influencing their selections in different ways.
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