๐˜ˆ๐˜ฅ๐˜ท๐˜ฆ๐˜ณ๐˜ต๐˜ช๐˜ด๐˜ช๐˜ฏ๐˜จ ๐˜ช๐˜ด ๐˜ข๐˜ญ๐˜ญ ๐˜ข๐˜ณ๐˜ฐ๐˜ถ๐˜ฏ๐˜ฅ ๐˜ถ๐˜ด, ๐˜ช๐˜ต ๐˜ช๐˜ด ๐˜ข๐˜ฏ ๐˜ถ๐˜ฏ๐˜ข๐˜ท๐˜ฐ๐˜ช๐˜ฅ๐˜ข๐˜ฃ๐˜ญ๐˜ฆ ๐˜ฑ๐˜ข๐˜ณ๐˜ต ๐˜ฐ๐˜ง ๐˜ฆ๐˜ท๐˜ฆ๐˜ณ๐˜บ๐˜ฐ๐˜ฏ๐˜ฆโ€™๐˜ด ๐˜ญ๐˜ช๐˜ง๐˜ฆ. ๐˜š๐˜ฐ๐˜ฎ๐˜ฆ ๐˜ฑ๐˜ฆ๐˜ฐ๐˜ฑ๐˜ญ๐˜ฆ ๐˜ด๐˜ข๐˜บ ๐˜ต๐˜ฉ๐˜ข๐˜ต ๐˜ข๐˜ฅ๐˜ท๐˜ฆ๐˜ณ๐˜ต๐˜ช๐˜ด๐˜ช๐˜ฏ๐˜จ ๐˜ช๐˜ด ๐˜ข ๐˜ฑ๐˜ฐ๐˜ด๐˜ช๐˜ต๐˜ช๐˜ท๐˜ฆ ๐˜ฑ๐˜ข๐˜ณ๐˜ต ๐˜ฐ๐˜ง ๐˜ฐ๐˜ถ๐˜ณ ๐˜ญรญ๐˜ท๐˜ฆ. ๐˜›๐˜ฐ ๐˜ธ๐˜ฉ๐˜ข๐˜ต ๐˜ฆ๐˜น๐˜ต๐˜ฆ๐˜ฏ๐˜ต ๐˜ฅ๐˜ฐ ๐˜บ๐˜ฐ๐˜ถ ๐˜ข๐˜จ๐˜ณ๐˜ฆ๐˜ฆ ๐˜ฐ๐˜ณ ๐˜ฅ๐˜ช๐˜ด๐˜ข๐˜จ๐˜ณ๐˜ฆ๐˜ฆ?

In the modern world, advertising has been contributing to society in which people access easily a great deal of information. It is
undeniable the fact that
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the undeniable fact that
advertising has been all the rage on a regular basis and
this
tendency is concerned as an advantageous movement. From my perspective, I firmly claim
this
has doubled-sword influences. On the one hand, it is indisputable that the indispensable role of advertising in human life related to economy and education. In terms of economy, enterprises
utilize
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utilizes
the advertising platforms to be approachable to customers
thus
develop promotion and consumerism.
Moreover
, the
evolvement
the act of sharing in the activities of a group
involvement
of firms simultaneously grows up the taxes for the government who allocate the financial resources for the conduction of other social aspects. In terms of education, information provision on advertising probably imparts a variety of knowledge for readers.
For example
, the clients are able to find out the composition of milk on the brochures of boxes and comprehend the benefits of nutrients for their children before purchasing any products.
On the other hand
, the negative impacts of advertising should not be underestimated especially on privacy and crime.
Firstly
, advertising has been gradually invading the personal life in the form of images or sounds.
For instance
, some citizens complain about
telesales
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Telesales
marketing on their phones.
Secondly
, unnamed individuals or organizations manipulate celebrity endorsement by posting their private photos on the social network for the purpose of persuading their fans to buy irrelevant goods, which is a kind of cheating
offenses
a lack of politeness; a failure to show regard for others; wounding the feelings or others
offences
. In conclusion,
although
the contribution of advertising to human society
development including
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development, including
the economy and education is
undenied
not precisely limited, determined, or distinguished
undefined
underneath
, some drawbacks need to be shed light on to restrict and ameliorate the bright side.
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