In many countries, the government likes to spend more money on the arts. Some people agree with this. However, others think government should spend more on health and education. Discuss both sides and give your opinion.

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modernization and globalization lead most of the states expand their allocation variety sphere. It is thought of some more and more governments should spend their

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fine arts,

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, others think that they should spend their budget the

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system and their community’s good physical condition.

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essay agrees that the countries ought to spend more

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money

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sector and will discuss

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points of view.

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of all, there are could be several beneficial factors spending budget to the arts,

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, the main benefit is that to preserve countries’ culture heritages. It is clear that contemporary life standards are getting an increase,

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,

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situation caused culture traditions or values disappeared. For

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reason, the majority of countries expend the

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their civilizations for preserving it.

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, Unesco is a prime example, today more and more cultural heritages are protected via the governments, with the help of their donations.

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, there are could be varying priorities, despite

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the government’s one of the most important purpose is that to improve their

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health

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system. It means that, with the help of developed

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and

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system, more and more countries can gain some achievements

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economic, political even cultural stability.

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, the majority of the states should spend budget

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sectors.

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, during the pandemic, all over the world came across disruptive effects an

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and

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sector. For

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reason, at the moment accelerating the development process of

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sections is the main focus of the many governments. In conclusion,

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spending more

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countries’ fine arts is pretty useful issued,

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, the

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process showed that governments’ authority’s good physical conditions and

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are extremely vital issues rather than art. In my opinion, the countries should expend more capital

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