In many countries, the government likes to spend more money on the arts. Some people agree with this. However, others think government should spend more on health and education. Discuss both sides and give your opinion.
In recent years, the effects of
both
modernization and globalization lead most of the states expand their allocation variety sphere. It is thought of some more and more governments should spend their money
fine arts, however
, others think that they should spend their budget the education
system and their community’s good physical condition. This
essay agrees that the countries ought to spend more money
Accept comma addition
money, health
health
and education
sector and will discuss both
points of view.
First
of all, there are could be several beneficial factors spending budget to the arts, however
, the main benefit is that to preserve countries’ culture heritages. It is clear that contemporary life standards are getting an increase, as a result
, this
situation caused culture traditions or values disappeared. For this
reason, the majority of countries expend the money
their civilizations for preserving it. For example
, Unesco is a prime example, today more and more cultural heritages are protected via the governments, with the help of their donations.
On the other hand
, there are could be varying priorities, despite this
the government’s one of the most important purpose is that to improve their both
health
and education
system. It means that, with the help of developed health
and education
system, more and more countries can gain some achievements such
as both
economic, political even cultural stability. Therefore
, the majority of the states should spend budget such
sectors. For example
, during the pandemic, all over the world came across disruptive effects an education
and health
sector. For this
reason, at the moment accelerating the development process of such
sections is the main focus of the many governments.
In conclusion, although
spending more money
countries’ fine arts is pretty useful issued, however
, the last
process showed that governments’ authority’s good physical conditions and education
are extremely vital issues rather than art. In my opinion, the countries should expend more capital such
sections in first step
.Suggestion
the first step
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