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The main cause of global warming is pollution from cars. To what extent do you agree or disagree?

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In recent times, global warming is one of the biggest threat to our planet.
Although
, I agree that the causes of global warming are due to the
pollution
 from cars, I,
however
, do not believe that it is the main cause. On one hand,
pollution
 from cars is undoubtedly a of the reasons of global warming.
First
, emissions from petrol and diesel engines,
increase
 the carbon monoxide and nitrogen, which
increase
 in the average temperature of the earth’s atmosphere and lead to global warming.
Moreover
,
increase
 in a number of cars has contributed to the air
pollution
 which lead to climate change.
Thus
, I think
pollution
 from cars is the causes of global warming.
However
, despite the obvious reasons of
pollution
 from cars, I still believe that burning fossil fuels in industries are the reasons of global warming. I concede that emissions of gases from the cars affect the environment, but fossil fuels
such
 as oil, natural gases and coal is used in industries and power plants which produce carbon dioxide which create greenhouse effect and lead to global warming.
Finally
, deforestation can have a serious impact on the environment. Reduction of trees, mainly due to burning and logging.
Consequently
, there are less number of trees to absorb the carbon dioxide from the environment, which lead to
increase
 in global warming. In short, while I agree that
pollution
 from cars is the reasons of global warming, I still believe that deforestation and burning fossil fuels in factories are better reasons of global warming.
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