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Due to television and the internet it is easier today for a large number of people to become famous. Is this a positive or negative development?

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Forcing a well-known person in the world through media
such
 as television and the internet is a better option for people nowadays than in the past. In my opinion, technology plays a vital role in
this
 era and making easier for them to opt for the choices to achieve their passion and seems a positive trend in the
entertainment
 industry.
To begin
 with, the modern era has a plethora of benefits through
entertainment
 platform by distributing a bunch of stars in the world.
Firstly
, individuals can take the advantage of the channels without anybody’s reference.
For instance
, YouTube is a platform opens for all age groups where they can develop their talents and transmitting to the audience to become a celebrity.
Besides
, without any discrimination, everyone can easily access these channels to prove their skills.
Likewise
, anyone with a smartphone today can easily cultivate a loyal fan base by broadcasting their talents through the internet.
Thus
, to a certain extent internet is playing to a particular level.
Furthermore
, channels encourage more reality concerts ranging from music shows to Masterchef competition to enhance individual’s talents and open a wider path to the
entertainment
 industry.
In addition
 to
this
, the channel provides, free of cost learning classes for economically backward people to make them realize that the talents exists in each one of us without any barriers.
On the other hand
, in the past talented people need to struggle a lot to get a slot on a few talk shows and become famous overnight. For an illustration, in the film business, especially Bollywood movies most of the actor's journey we can clearly understand that they have somebody to support in that particular trade and ease for them to achieve a direct entry without auditions, even if they are talentless and the chances of a talent person are falling according to their status. In conclusion,
entertainment platform
Accept comma addition
entertainment, platform
 opens a wider gateway for each individual in
this
 modern world through different applications to express and present themselves for global recognition and the possibility of earning celebrity status.
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