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Some people say that Ebooks and modern technology will totally replace traditional newspaper and magazines to what extent do you agree or disagree.

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I completely disagree with the statement that the latest technology will take over the conventional use of newspaper and magazine.
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 explain how information
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 printed paper is more trustworthy and doesn’t require
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 to get the relevant details.
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 and foremost, newspaper and magazine contain the correct information. If an individual wants to research on a particular topic, and goes to the library for references, he will get more trustworthy facts and figures written by various writers and professors.
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, searching in modern technology can gather details from any sources, which may be false and unreliable.
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, according to the University of Mexico, the traditional way of reading books and papers will never end in thousands of years, because of its accuracy and ethical data.
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, reading a printed papers and books doesn’t need
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 access. It cannot be ignored that the development of world wide web technology is not equally spread all over the world. The online services would only be available in developed cities and countries. As a consequence, people who live in rural or remote areas will still need the print version.
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, the residents of Eritrea, a county of South Africa, have less access to the
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. And the main mode of communication and information for them is pen and paper. In conclusion,
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 the modern inventions like Ebook have made our life easier and convenient, but the importance of print version cannot be replaced because they are more reliable and trustworthy and doesn’t need
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 to approach reading.
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