You are studying a short course in another country. Your accommodation was arranged by the course provider. There is a major problem with accommodation. Write a letter to the course provider. In your letter: say what the problem is describe the accommodation you thought you were getting ask the provider to solve the problem

Dear sir, I am writing
this
letter to inform you that I started a course of
Masters
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in commerce in Canada with the reference of your institute. According to the commitment , the accommodation was provided by you is not appropriate because there are various issues facing
by
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me as it is very difficult for me to concentrate on
studies
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my studies
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.
Firstly
, there
are
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is
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lack
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a lack
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of amenities like lighting and
vantilation
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ventilation
and the room is not suitable as I thought before.
Moreover
, my
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roommate
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room mate
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roommate
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is
also
quite talkative and plays loud music which disturbs me ,
like wise
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, you promised me
for
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a place full of facilities and
seperate
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separate
room for me,
however
, it is not up to the mark,
hence
, I feel fully disappointed by my housing arrangements.
In addition
, I want you to solve
this
problem as soon as possible by
alloting
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allowing
me another space as I mentioned earlier,
otherwise
, kindly refund me the money back , so that, I can manage on my own. Waiting for your prompt service. Yours faithfully, Bhawna Arya
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