You are studying a short course in another country. Your accommodation was arranged by the course provider. There is a major problem with accommodation. Write a letter to the course provider. In your letter: say what the problem is describe the accommodation you thought you were getting ask the provider to solve the problem
Dear sir,
I am writing
this
letter to inform you that I started a course of Masters
in commerce in Canada with the reference of your institute. According to the commitment , the accommodation was provided by you is not appropriate because there are various issues facing Fix the agreement mistake
master
by
me as it is very difficult for me to concentrate on Change preposition
apply
studies
.
Correct pronoun usage
my studies
Firstly
, there are
Change the verb form
is
lack
of amenities like lighting and Correct article usage
a lack
vantilation
and the room is not suitable as I thought before. Correct your spelling
ventilation
Moreover
, my Correct your spelling
roommate
room mate
is Correct your spelling
roommate
also
quite talkative and plays loud music which disturbs me ,like wise
, you promised me Correct your spelling
likewise
for
a place full of facilities and Change preposition
apply
seperate
room for me,Correct your spelling
separate
however
, it is not up to the mark, hence
, I feel fully disappointed by my housing arrangements.
In addition
, I want you to solve this
problem as soon as possible by alloting
me another space as I mentioned earlier, Correct your spelling
allowing
otherwise
, kindly refund me the money back , so that, I can manage on my own. Waiting for your prompt service.
Yours faithfully,
Bhawna AryaSubmitted by Jasbir kaur on
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