In recent times many people are making the decision to live alone. What are the causes of this? Does it have positive or negative effects on society?

Nowadays, there are many people are making a crucial
decision
to live alone far from their siblings or their families. In spite of the danger of
this
decision
, a lot of people want to separate from their relatives.
As a result
,
this
trouble is affecting on the whole of the society. There are several causes and motives for
this
problem
.
Additionally
, there
are
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is
a bad
effects
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effect
on the country.
First
of all, the
first
reason for
this
dilemma is the globalisation which is subsisted in the recent days.
Furthermore
, the existence of internet which stimulates young people to separate from their families. The
second
one is that the high proportion of people who take
this
decision
is teens and youth. Noticeably, that
this
age has the spirit of rebellion. So, they take
this
grave
decision
.
Moreover
, there are some parents who cruelly treat with their sons and punish them. As a consequence, their sons abhor and hate them to a point which pushes them to leave them and live far from them
.
Accept space
.
The
third
one is that if there are disputes between the wife and the husband, these disputes motivate the sons to live far from them.
For instance
,
this
problem
takes place in the western countries
such
as the US, the UK, Australia and so on.
This
trouble occurs owing to that these societies have more freedom than the other countries.
On the other hand
,
this
issue
is seldom taking
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has seldom taken
seldom takes
place in the eastern countries.
For example
, Egypt, Saudi Arabia and Turkey.
Second
of all,
this
issue has negative effects not positive effects. Notwithstanding,
this
problem
is popular
with
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in
the western countries. There are several negative effects, as an example of
this
is that
this
dilemma will destroy the relationships between people who decide to live alone and their families
consequently
,
this
also
will bring the ruin on the society. As well as,
this
issue will cause many diseases
such
as stress and these diseases will be between people who want to separate because they have not any experience how to live alone and he will think and say to himself how can I live alone. These diseases will be existed between the families who have a
sons
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son
who had separated from them. To sum up, I want to say that I disagree with people who want to live alone and I want from the authorities in the world to solve
this
problem
.
Submitted by Joe elsantawy  on

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