Nowadays many students have the opportunity to study for part or all their courses in foreign countries .While studying abroad brings many benefits to individual students. Do you agree or disagree?

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Education is building block or rather foundation for the students to become successful in life. There has been a paradigm shift in decisions of choosing the universities,

now a days

the period of time that is happening now; any continuous stretch of time including the moment of speech

nowadays

students prefer to study abroad due to its various reaping benefits.

but

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But

on the contrary

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, they have the detrimental effects. Personally, I see eye to eye with the central idea. On one hand, Supporters believe that

there

of them or themselves

their

evidences significantly proving

supremacy

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the supremacy

of the foreign courses. With

plethora

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the plethora

a plethora

of advance researches & more practical approach towards imparting knowledge which native university

lacks which

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lacks, which

makes foreign university their top choice. There is proven study done by Howard University that reflects

80% increase

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a 80 % increase

of international students in foreign countries all over the world.

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, international degree holders are preferred by top organisations around the world evidently, due to their adaptability, communication skills & practical & latest knowhow of

business world

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the business world

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, researches done by universities like Oxford, Yale & Howard are extensively adopted by top business organisations to improve employee best practices & policies.

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, due to

change

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changes

in the preference of choosing foreign

universities native

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universities, native

universities are

loosing

fail to keep or to maintain; cease to have, either physically or in an abstract sense

losing

their importance as well as

business

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businesses

a business

which in return leading to brain drain.

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a student studying from aboard would prefer to work & settle in abroad. Certainly, which has the detrimental effect on

respective country’s economy

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the respective country’s economy

because

first

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they spend on education & once they start working in

foreign country

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a foreign country

foreign countries

they spend for their in

foreign land

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foreign lands

. So foreign countries have win win situation but not good for

native’s

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native

country. To summarize, as there are two sides of the coin, studying abroad has that too, albeit for the students it can be fruitful.

However

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, the value of education system in their respective country is decreasing. I think

Government

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the Government

should rework & reform the education system in

such

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way that it stand par with best Universities

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meeting the goal of 3 or fewer
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Overall Band Score

Coherence and Cohesion: 9.0

Logical structure

Introduction & conclusion present

Supported main points

Accurate linking words

Variety in linking words

Lexical resource: 4.0

Varied vocabulary

Accurate spelling & word formation

Grammatical Range: 4.0

Mix of complex & simple sentences

Clear and correct grammar

Task Achievement: 6.5

Complete response

6.5

Clear & comprehensive ideas

Relevant & specific examples

Appropriate word count

4 paragraphs

318 words

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Nowadays many students have the opportunity to study for part or all their courses in foreign countries .While studying abroad brings many benefits to individual students. Do you agree or disagree?

Fully explain your ideas

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