Nowadays many students have the opportunity to study for part or all their courses in foreign countries .While studying abroad brings many benefits to individual students. Do you agree or disagree?
Education is building block or rather foundation for the students to become successful in life. There has been a paradigm shift in decisions of choosing the universities,
now a days
students prefer to study abroad due to its various reaping benefits. the period of time that is happening now; any continuous stretch of time including the moment of speech
nowadays
but
Suggestion
But
on the contrary
, they have the detrimental effects. Personally, I see eye to eye with the central idea.
On one hand, Supporters believe that there
evidences significantly proving of them or themselves
their
supremacy
of the foreign courses. With Suggestion
the supremacy
plethora
of advance researches & more practical approach towards imparting knowledge which native university Suggestion
the plethora
a plethora
lacks which
makes foreign university their top choice. There is proven study done by Howard University that reflects Accept comma addition
lacks, which
80% increase
of international students in foreign countries all over the world. Suggestion
a 80 % increase
Secondly
, international degree holders are preferred by top organisations around the world evidently, due to their adaptability, communication skills & practical & latest knowhow of business world
. Suggestion
the business world
For example
, researches done by universities like Oxford, Yale & Howard are extensively adopted by top business organisations to improve employee best practices & policies.
On the other hand
, due to change
in the preference of choosing foreign Suggestion
changes
universities native
universities are Accept comma addition
universities, native
loosing
their importance as well as fail to keep or to maintain; cease to have, either physically or in an abstract sense
losing
business
which in return leading to brain drain. Suggestion
businesses
a business
For instance
a student studying from aboard would prefer to work & settle in abroad. Certainly, which has the detrimental effect on respective country’s economy
because Suggestion
the respective country’s economy
first
they spend on education & once they start working in foreign country
they spend for their in Suggestion
a foreign country
foreign countries
foreign land
. So foreign countries have win win situation but not good for Suggestion
foreign lands
native’s
country.
To summarize, as there are two sides of the coin, studying abroad has that too, albeit for the students it can be fruitful. Suggestion
native
However
, the value of education system in their respective country is decreasing. I think Government
should rework & reform the education system in Suggestion
the Government
such
way that it stand par with best Universities .
Accept space
.
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