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he given pie charts show data on the population ages in Yemen and ... the ages of populations of Yemen and Italy by 201

he given pie charts show data on the population ages in Yemen and ... the ages of populations of Yemen and Italy by 201
The charts compare the ages of populations in 2010 and
predicts
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for
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2050 in different two countries –
Yemen
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 and Italy-.
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, what stands out from the graph
that
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while
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 it is predicted that
percentage
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the percentage
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 of
15
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the 15
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-59
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population
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 will increase by 2050 in
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,
proportion
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the proportion
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 of that will decrease in Italy.
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percentage
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the percentage
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 of 60+
years
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 will rise by 2050
both
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Yemen
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 and Italy. As can be seen from the graph,
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population
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the population
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 of
Yemen
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 in 15-59
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 started at under
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half in 2000 and it will experience a slow rise of just above 57% by 2050.
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of
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Italy will register a slight decline from just under 61% to approximately 46.2% between 2000 and 2050.
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population
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the population
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 of 60+
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 in
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 and Italy
begined
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began
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at 3,6% and at about 24%,
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respectively
. yet it is expected that
this
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population
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 will witness a slow growth to approximately 5 % in
Yemen
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,
whereas
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 it will climb to approximately two-fifths in
Yemen
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.

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Vocabulary: Replace the words years, population, yemen with synonyms.
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Vocabulary: The word "graph" was used 2 times.
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Vocabulary: The word "percentage" was used 2 times.
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Vocabulary: The word "rise" was used 2 times.
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Vocabulary: The word "approximately" was used 3 times.
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Vocabulary: The word "slow" was used 2 times.
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