In the past, shopping was a domestic routine task. Many people nowadays regard it as a hobby. To what extent do you think is a positive trend?
Shopping is an important part of our lives. So, many people in the world are doing the shopping every day. They are spending millions of dollars on
this
. Hence
, it became a hobby for everyone. In spite of, this
craft was local and domestic routine task in the past. But, nowadays, it became a popular task in all the countries of the world. Additionally
, it became a fruitful project. As a consequence, a lot of people are seeking to make a shopping shop. As a result
, he can earn a lot of money. There are two sides of this
issue. The first
opinion sees that this
project is positive for individuals and society as well. On the contrary
, the second
proposal, thinks that this
task is negative for society and individuals. Hence
, I will explicit all these proposals and I will give my opinion.
First
of all, in the past, this
mission was domestic and not fruitful than nowadays. Owing to, several reasons. For instance
, it had not any technological service which this
service is a main part of shopping today. Furthermore
, the request for buying clothes or buying chocolates was very low. Moreover
, there was not any method to buy via internet because the internet was not existed. On the other hand
, nowadays, the cycle of shopping has become effective and modern. Because of the new services such
as Online shopping. As well as, there are several malls which contain a variety of amazing and astounding goods. Also
, the request is increasingly high. Additionally
, there is a special discount on the sales. All these advantages make the cycle of shopping, fabulous and wonderful.
To sum up, as far as I am concerned, I think that shopping is positive and useful for individuals and society. Because it refreshes the economy of any country. Also
, it creates a lot of opportunities for young people to work.Submitted by Joe elsantawy on
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