In many countries, people are concerned about the number of children who are overweight. What do you think are the causes of this? What solutions can you suggest?
In recent years, it is observed that obesity is increasing in children all over the world.
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, kids like to eat more junk food than the home made food nowadays, which is very unhealthy. Some schools Linking Words
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by having Pizza Day where kids are provided with pizza slices in schools once a week, which makes children obese. Linking Words
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, entertainment sources like Television, Tablets, video games etc., are easily accessible to kids as compared to earlier times. Linking Words
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kids spend most of their time indoors, rather than playing outside. Linking Words
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, due to the busy schedule of parents, they do not have much time to take the kids for a walk or play with them in the evening.
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problem and making the kids healthy. Linking Words
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of all, the schools should play an important role by making the kids aware of the benefits of healthy food and motivating them to participate in the physical activities like sports. A gym period should be made mandatory for all the students in the school. Linking Words
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, Parents should involve minors in daily chores like gardening, cleaning etc. In Linking Words
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way, kids will limit their dependency on devices and become physically more active and fit.
In conclusion, the parents and the schools should inculcate good eating habits in kids and involving them in outdoor activities. Linking Words
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